Within the sleak strips, a packet of crushed sugar, sickly sweet ... your fingers , slipping through mine, Only once mine.. cold fingers, empty windows, glazed eyes , unreal dream, all you are a packet of spoiled sugar
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Sugar a vice as a pack of cigarettes. Coffee and sugar tastes better, doesn't it? :)
2 comments:
Sugar a vice as a pack of cigarettes. Coffee and sugar tastes better, doesn't it? :)
uhuhuh. I like. Bom ritmo, boa gradação para o final e boa metáfora. especialmente,um boa metáfora.parabéns
Kaiser
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